I liked the story very much until the last 2 paragraphs. Since H/Hr is my OTP (which I thought I'd mentioned when I submitted my preferred pairings to r_becca), I guess I was hoping to get something more, oh, romantic, rather than cynical. Next year I'll be sure to be more specific. I did enjoy the public sex, which was tres hot. But the ending left me cold. I'm sorry :(

PS I'm not stalking your journal; you and I are on each other's friends lists, but this isn't my regular name. And we're both Ravenclaws...:)